Talofa Angel, WOW ! I cant believe you wrote this ! this better than mine for sure this is like a full song !, Angel your doing so goodd !! never give up!! KEEP IT UP ANGEL!
My name is Shannon, and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
What a fantastic song! I love how it’s super motivational, and that you’ve paid a lot of attention to making the ends of each line rhyme so that the song can be catchy and follow a nice tune. Ka pai!
What other sorts of songs do you write about? How did you think of the words? Do you like singing?
I’m super keen to hear your song. Because the ‘Replace the Lyrics’ activity is a two parter, if you make another post with yourself singing, you’ll be able to get some extra points!
Talofa Angel, WOW ! I cant believe you wrote this ! this better than mine for sure this is like a full song !, Angel your doing so goodd !! never give up!! KEEP IT UP ANGEL!
ReplyDeleteHey, Deborah.
DeleteI will never give up!
Thank you for commenting on my blog!
Kia Ora Angel,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Shannon, and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
What a fantastic song! I love how it’s super motivational, and that you’ve paid a lot of attention to making the ends of each line rhyme so that the song can be catchy and follow a nice tune. Ka pai!
What other sorts of songs do you write about? How did you think of the words? Do you like singing?
I’m super keen to hear your song. Because the ‘Replace the Lyrics’ activity is a two parter, if you make another post with yourself singing, you’ll be able to get some extra points!
Keep up the fantastic work!
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)