This is an awesome and creative poem! Well done creating a Haiku using the 5-7-5 syllable structure. I know how tricky it can be to find words to fit perfectly in the number of syllables, so this is very impressive!
Your poem was lovely and summery, I could imagine and feel all of the words you have written. The sun has been shining like lava in Auckland recently, it has been so hot!
Have you written poetry before these activities? I enjoy writing poetry, I think it's a really creative and emotive way of writing about things.
I hope you keep writing these fabulous poems, and don’t forget to submit them to the poetry slam!
Kia ora anō Angel,
ReplyDeleteThis is an awesome and creative poem! Well done creating a Haiku using the 5-7-5 syllable structure. I know how tricky it can be to find words to fit perfectly in the number of syllables, so this is very impressive!
Your poem was lovely and summery, I could imagine and feel all of the words you have written. The sun has been shining like lava in Auckland recently, it has been so hot!
Have you written poetry before these activities? I enjoy writing poetry, I think it's a really creative and emotive way of writing about things.
I hope you keep writing these fabulous poems, and don’t forget to submit them to the poetry slam!
Ngā mihi,
Lauren
Kia Ora Lauren,
DeleteI also love making poems too!
Yes, the sun is shining everyday!
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